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The Pretty Woman in the Bright Yellow Dress

June 8, 2019

THE PRETTY WOMAN IN THE BRIGHT YELLOW DRESS

Short Fiction – A Romance By Vikram Karve

From my Creative Writing Archives:

Long back – almost 15 years ago – sometime in the year 2005 – there was a creative writing competition inviting Fiction Short Stories for Children.

I wrote this story for that competition. 

Though this is a story for children – I am sure you will enjoy reading it. 

Those days I lived in Mumbai.

If you live in Mumbai – I am sure you know that there is a sea-facing women’s hostel on Marine Drive near Charni Road Station.

I first visited this hostel in the 1970’s to deliver some goodies to a girlfriend of a Navy shipmate. 

Many years later – I crossed the hostel every morning and evening on my jog-cum-walks from Churchgate to Chowpatty and back. 

Maybe that’s why this place features in many of my stories. 

But – remember – Dear Reader – that this story is pure fiction – totally apocryphal – and – there was no such “pretty woman in a bright yellow dress” as described in the story.

Also remember – this story is set in Mumbai – circa 2005 – so – you will have to go back in time almost 15 years. 

And – the story is narrated by a young boy – who is not yet 12 years old. 

So – here is the story – suitably abridged and edited – for easy reading on a digital screen.

Tell me if you like the story… 

THE PRETTY WOMAN IN THE BRIGHT YELLOW DRESS 

“Wake up – I am sending you on a mission…” my father said, shaking me off my bed.

“Mission…!!!” I jumped out of bed and got ready in a jiffy.

My father is a detective – and – once in a while – he sends me on undercover assignments.

My father is the only thing I have got in this world – after God took my mother away.

“Surveillance…?” I asked, as we stood discreetly at the bus stop outside Taraporewala Aquarium on Marine Drive near the Charni Road Railway Station.

My father looked at me – and he said to me:

“Yes. A simple “tail-chase”. Look to your right – keep your eyes focused on the gate of the working women’s hostel. A woman will come out soon. You follow her – shadow her – like a tail – but very discreetly – and the moment you lose her – ring me up on your mobile.”

Suddenly – a tall woman wearing a bright yellow dress appeared at the gate.

My father gave me a nudge – and then he disappeared.

The woman walked towards Charni Road Station.

She crossed the over-bridge to platform No. 2 – and then she waited for the train to Churchgate.

The woman got into the ladies compartment – and I followed her in.

Though I am a boy – I am still below 12 years of age – and – I am allowed to travel in the ladies compartment.

The woman in the bright yellow dress sat down – and I observed her – unseen – standing in the crowd.

She must have been around 25 – or probably in her late 20’s – maybe 30 – but – she looked very lovely and youthful – and – with her smooth fair creamy complexion – she looked really smashing in the bright yellow dress.

She looked lovely – yes – she was really very pretty.

What was most striking about the woman was her huge expressive dancing eyes.

At Churchgate – she leisurely strolled down the platform – whilst everyone else rushed by.

She browsed at Wheeler’s bookstall – and then – she stopped at Tibbs – bought a “Frankie” – and walked towards the underground exit.

I too love “Frankies” – so I quickly bought one too – and I followed her – careful not to be seen.

We both walked – me behind her – munching away – straight down the road towards Nariman Point – till she stopped at the Inox Multiplex.

Shit…!!!

I hoped the woman wouldn’t go for an Adults movie.

But – luckily – she bought a ticket for the movie “Cats & Dogs” 

So – I too bought a ticket – and I followed her in.

I really enjoyed the rest of my mission.

The lovely woman in bright yellow dress was quite a fun person – and she spent the day thoroughly enjoying herself – seeing the sights – browsing books at Flora Fountain – window shopping on Colaba Causeway – sampling street food – eating things I love to eat – doing the things I like to do.

It was smooth sailing.

Then – the woman suddenly stepped into a beauty parlour.

Now – I needed backup.

So – I called up my father.

But – my father told me to abort the mission – and – he asked me to meet him at our usual favourite place in the vicinity – Stadium Restaurant next to Churchgate station.

“You want me to abort the mission…?” I protested.

“Yes – you abort the mission…” my father ordered me, “and – you come fast to Churchgate – our usual place – Stadium Restaurant – I will tell you the reason when you get here…”

My father was waiting inside Stadium Restaurant.

He had chosen an inconspicuous table in the middle of the restaurant – and he sat facing the entrance.

I sat by his side – so I too could have a view of the entrance.

I told him everything.

He listened intently.

Suddenly – I saw the lovely woman in the bright yellow dress standing bold as brass at the entrance of the restaurant looking directly at us.

I felt a tremor of nervousness.

The ground slipped beneath my feet.

And – when I saw the woman coming directly towards our table – I slunk down – and I tried to hide in my chair – and I wished the earth would swallow me up.

My father smiled at the lovely woman in the bright yellow dress – and he said to her: “Hello, Nanda…”

I was stunned.

“Hello, Nanda…?” 

My father was saying to the woman: “Hello, Nanda…”

This was too much…!!!

I looked at my father – puzzled by his behaviour.

First my father sends me after this lovely woman in the bright yellow dress – on a “tail-chase” – shadowing her all day – and now – he says to her: “Hello, Nanda”…!!!

The lovely woman in the bright yellow dress – with dancing eyes – she sat down opposite me – on the seat next to my father.

She looked at me curiously.

“You two have met – haven’t you…?” father asked.

“No – I don’t think we have met…” the woman said – looking intently at me.

“No…? Are you sure…? Try to think. You must have seen him somewhere before…” my father said to the woman.

The woman looked at me – and she said to my father:

“I am sure I have not seen him before. I never forget a face. This is the first time I am seeing him. He is cute – yes – your son is really cute…”

My father winked at me in appreciation.

I had successfully completed the surveillance mission without being spotted.

But – who was this woman – I wondered – who was this woman who my father had asked me to shadow whole day.

So – I asked my father:

“Who is this Aunty…?”

The pretty woman in the bright yellow dress looked lovingly at me with her dancing eyes.

And then – she said to me:

“Don’t call me Aunty. I am going to be your new Mother…”

VIKRAM KARVE

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This story is a work of fiction. Events, Places, Settings and Incidents narrated in the story are a figment of my imagination. The characters do not exist and are purely imaginary. Any resemblance to persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental.

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This story was written by me Vikram Karve around 15 years ago in the year 2005 during my glorious Mumbai days and posted online by me earlier in my creative writing blogs a number of times including at urls: http://creative.sulekha.com/don-t-call-me-aunty_81844_blog and https://karvefiction.wordpress.com/tag/leisure/  and  http://karvediat.blogspot.in/2010/10/mission-accomplished.html  and  http://creative.sulekha.com/the-beautiful-woman-with-dancing-eyes_66415_blog  and  http://karvediat.blogspot.in/2013/11/woman-in-yellow.html  and  http://karvediat.blogspot.in/2012/09/the-woman-from-charni-road.html  and  http://karvediat.blogspot.in/2011/05/tail-chase-to-churchgate.html  and  http://karvediat.blogspot.in/2013/11/woman-in-yellow.html and http://karvediat.blogspot.in/2015/07/the-lovely-woman-in-bright-yellow-dress.html and http://karvediat.blogspot.in/2016/12/the-pretty-woman-in-bright-yellow-dress.html and http://karvediat.blogspot.com/2017/06/the-mission.html etc

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